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After The Blast

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1default After The Blast on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:31 am

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AFTER THE BLAST

The air around was very pleasant
Dancing in its vibrant tranquility
The hundred multitudes gathered around
there, never knew their many kin would weep
Tonight and witness an explosive calamity

At THE beast hour of THE day
Fire raged around gulping
Every panic stricken preys
None lived to tell THE take about
The fear stricken shouts or cries
Or about THE doomed silence of THE pantheons

When help arrived at THE useless hour
Their eyes saw THE soulless bodies
Scattered everywhere and felt that worst spell
Their loved ones reached there
Just to see THE half burnt lifeless and cold bodies

The little kids knew nothing but weep
When other scream in pain
And hug their parents that lay dead in front
Comforting themselves to THE thought that
They would return soon to hug and kiss them

From that day to this moment
Time corroded nothing
Their pain and cries still remain
And their hope yet to be fulfilled
But will they be…?

© Chubby

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2default Re: After The Blast on Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:38 pm

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Wow. Very inspiring. Great story/poem mate. Hope to see more of your works in the future!!!

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3default Re: After The Blast on Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:38 am

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Darthmaul wrote:Wow. Very inspiring. Great story/poem mate. Hope to see more of your works in the future!!!

Thankyou, I glad you took the time to read it



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4default Re: After The Blast on Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:28 am

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I like this lines the most :D


From that day to this moment
Time corroded nothing
Their pain and cries still remain
And their hope yet to be fulfilled
But will they be…?

Its like a suspense XD hahaha..very good piece lad! ^_^ :D

9/10 :D

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5default Re: After The Blast on Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:24 am

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Marvin wrote:I like this lines the most :D


From that day to this moment
Time corroded nothing
Their pain and cries still remain
And their hope yet to be fulfilled
But will they be…?

Its like a suspense XD hahaha..very good piece lad! ^_^ :D

9/10 :D

Oh! Thankyou so Much marvin I am glad you like my work



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